英语组 杨建成
一、There be 用法错误
1. It is a good school that there have many good teachers.
改为：It is a good school where ( in which) there are many good teachers.
注: 先行词在定语从句中作状语，故用副词或介词短语；There be 句型中的谓语是be，不能受汉语影响用have代替be。
或改为：It is a school which has many good teachers.
注：先行词在定语从句中作主语，故用代词。
或改为：It is a school with many good teachers. 或There are many good teachers in this school.
注：用with短语作后置定语。
2. There are teachers try their best to teach us.
改为：There are teachers who try their best to teach us.
注：简单句只能有一个谓语，所以可以将第二个动词变为定语从句的谓语。
或改为: There are teachers trying their best to teach us.
注：简单句只能有一个谓语，所以可以将第二个动词变为现在分词作后置定语。
或改为：Teachers try their best to teach us.
注：这个句子只有简单的主谓宾结构，简洁明了。
二、多谓语错误
3. I decided give up it.
改为：I decided to give it up.
注：简单句只能有一个谓语，并列句的多个谓语由并列连词连接，复合句中主句一个谓语，从句一个谓语。故将decided 作谓语，将另外一个动词改为不定式作宾语。
另外，give up是一个动词+副词构成的词组，代词作宾语时，应置于动词和副词之间。
4. I am love my parents.
改为：I love my parents.
注：在一般现在时和一般过去时中，实义动词单独就可以作谓语，故将be去掉。
5. He likes watch TV hates opera.
改为：He likes watching TV series but hates drama.
注：这里有三个动词，将likes和hates分别作为并列句的谓语，将watch改为动名词作宾语。另外，电视剧应译为TV series，戏剧应译为drama。
三、无谓语错误
6. She always at home and do housework.
改为：She always stays at home and does housework.
注：并列句的第一个分句没有谓语，故增加一个动词作谓语；又因主语是第三人称单数，故谓语动词+s。
7. We all happy.
改为：We are all happy.
注：英文的每个句子都有谓语。只有在标题中，或承前省略的情况下可以省略谓语。本句中happy是形容词，不能作谓语。
8. I between my father and mother.
改为：I sat（stood/was） between my father and mother.
注：介词短语不能作谓语。
9. I often listening music on MP3.
改为：I often listen to music on MP3.
注：不定式、动名词和分词是非谓语形式，不能单独作谓语。另外，listen属不及物动词，加介词后才能接宾语。
四、词性错误
10. I want to success.
改为：I want to achieve success. 或I want to be successful.
注：success 是名词，其动词为succeed。
11. I hope all my teachers will happy everyday.
改为：I hope all my teachers will be happy everyday.
注：will+动词原形构成将来时的谓语，happy是个形容词，所以谓语部分缺少一个动词be。
12. They are very happy and health.
改为：They are very happy and healthy.
注：本句为主系表结构，表语为描述性形容词，health为名词，其形容词为healthy。
13. Have some knowledge of English is necessary.
改为：To have some knowledge of English is necessary. 或Having some knowledge of English is necessary.
或 It is necessary to have some knowledge of English.
注：动词原形不能作主语，改为不定式或动名词就可以作主语了。
14. Her study is not well.
改为：Her study is not good.
注：well一般为副词，除了表示身体好时，词性为形容词。本句需要一个形容词作表语。
五、very的用法错误
15. I very like reading.
改为：I like reading very much.
注：very 虽然是副词，但不能修饰动词。very much可以修饰动词。
六、all和both作同位语时的位置
16. They both are kind and helpful.
改为：They are both kind and helpful.
注：all，both作同位语时应跟在名词之后，但如果谓语中有be， 则应放在be之后。
七、频度副词的位置
17. I never have been there before.
改为：I have never been there before.
注：频度副词如：always, often, usually, sometimes, seldom, never 等，通常放在行为动词之前，be动词、助动词、情态动词之后。
18. He often is late for school.
改为：He is often late for school.
八、修饰动词时副词的位置
19. He always hard work.
改为：He always works hard.
注:副词修饰动词时，应放在动词之后。另外，在用一般现在时的句子中，主语为第三人称单数时，谓语+s\es。
九、名词表示概念时的错误
20. My father is driver.
改为：My father is a driver.
注：不可数名词表示概念时不用冠词；可数名词表示概念分三种情况：（一）a\an+单数可数名词。（二）the+单数可数名词。(三)可数名词的复数形式。
21. I often listen to the music on MP3.
改为：I often listen to music on MP3.
注：music为不可数名词，在不特指的情况下，不用冠词。
十、宾语从句的语序的问题
22. I want to know what are you interested in?
改为：I want to know what you are interested in.
注：（1）由what, how, when, why, whether等特殊疑问词引导的宾语从句不再是一个独立的疑问句，故句末用句号。（2）宾语从句用陈述句的语序，即主语在前，谓语动词在后。
十一、宾语从句中时态一致的问题
23. He said he loves music.
改为：He said he loved music.
注：宾语从句中的时态应和主句的时态保持一致，如果主句是过去时态，则从句必须用过去的某种时态。但是，如果从句表达的是客观真理、客观事实时，则用一般现在时。
24. I remember I returned the book to you.
注：本句是正确的。如果主句的主语是现在时态，从句可以用各种时态，不受主句时态影响。
十二、主谓一致的问题
25. He always work hard.
改为：He always works hard.
注：在一般现在时、一般过去时、现在进行时、过去进行时、现在完成时等时态中，主语是第三人称单数时，谓语要用单数形式，如：is, was, has, does等。
26. The little girl don’t know what I mean.
改为：The little girl doesn’t know what I mean.
27. More than one student make the mistake.
改为：More than one student makes the mistake.
注：More than one student 是单数形式表示复数意义的概念，但谓语需用单数形式。
28. The teacher as well as his students have been told to register.
改为：The teacher as well as his students has been told to register.
注：as well as ,with, together with, including, besides等连接的并列主语时，谓语的单、复数取决于其前面的名词。
十三． 时态错误
29. The question of population was serious in modern times.
改为: The population problem is serious in modern times.
注：in modern times 是现在时间状语。
30.Electricity was an important energy. Our machines will depend on it to work.It had become a necessary part of our life.
改为: Electricity is an important energy. Our machines depend on it to work. It has become a necessary part of our life.
注：因为本句表达的是电的一般特征，故用现在时态。
十四． Make和 let泛滥使用
31. The newspapers make us know what take place in the world.
32. Reference books let us be able to more conveniently study English.
33. Computers make us to solve difficult math problems in a short time.
34. The news made us feel afraid.
35. The English teacher let us to do more exercises after class.
36. This man thinks that number 8 will make him have a lot of money.
改为：
31. Newspapers keep me informed of what is going on at home and abroad.
32. Reference books can facilitate our English study.
33. Computers enable us to work out complicated math problems very easily.
34. The news filled us with fear.
35. The English teacher asked us to do more exercises after class.
36. The man thinks that the number 8 will bring him great fortune.
十五． More and more使用过泛
37. We are in Grade Two. And the new words in the text become more and more.
38. You remember new words more and more, then your comprehension seems easier and easier.
39. Now it is more and more difficult to find a good job, for the positions are less and less and the people that need them are more and more.
改为：
37. We are in Grade Two. There are more new words in the text.
38. The more words you remember, the better comprehension ability you have.
39. Now it is more difficult to find a good job, for the positions are not enough.
十六． 举例形式不妥
40. Some people think that some numbers can bring good luck. Such as “six, eight, eighteen” and so on.
41. Everyone has his favorite TV program, for example: news, plays, animal world, and so on.
42. Too many people cause a great deal of problems, such as food, lost work, house and so on.
43. There are a number of sources to get information from, such as you can watch TV, listen to radio and look at newspapers.
改为：
40. Some people think that certain numbers, such as 6, 8, 18, etc., can bring them good luck.
Certain numbers, for example, 6, 8, 18, are regarded by some people as lucky numbers.
注: for example通常用于举一例，such as用于举几个例子。另外， such as 和 for example是介词，不能独立引导从句。
41. Everyone has his own favorite TV program. For example, I like News and Animal World on CCTV.
42. Overpopulation causes many serious problems such as food shortage, unemployment and a serious housing problem.
注：such as 为介词短语，后接名词构成介宾结构。
43. There are a number of sources to get information from. For example, we can get information through TV, radio, or newspaper.
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